Pieces Within Pieces.

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He didn’t break

Her heart,

He broke the pieces.

 

-Dante

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9 thoughts on “Pieces Within Pieces.

    KasimsKorner said:
    July 7, 2015 at 4:58 AM

    Clever. I had to read this twice to fully appreciate it’s meaning. Simple yet powerful. Iโ€™ve followed and ill be sure to check out some of your other posts. Iโ€™m a fellow writer myself and would love to get your feedback on some of my posts if you have time. Iโ€™m working on a novel currently and I post short stories on my blog. If not, thanks anyway, have fun writing and keep it up ๐Ÿ™‚

      Original-Dante responded:
      July 7, 2015 at 5:05 AM

      Thank you ๐Ÿ™‚ I try to add twists in my poetry here and there. It pleases me to know you’ve followed and want to delve deeper into my posts….i’ll be sure to do the same, after all, helping each other as writers is all that matters ๐Ÿ™‚

        KasimsKorner said:
        July 7, 2015 at 5:09 AM

        Thanks for the support ๐Ÿ™‚ and wow 1300+ followers? Congrats ๐Ÿ™‚ I can appreciate good poetry but can’t write it for the life of me :’)

        Original-Dante responded:
        July 7, 2015 at 5:18 AM

        Haha thanks! you should give poetry a try, its fulfilling ๐Ÿ˜€

        KasimsKorner said:
        July 7, 2015 at 5:25 AM

        I have done for a prophecy in the novel I’m writing and i was suprised by how well it turned out. However my passions always gonna be story writing, there’s nothing quite like making a character out of nothing

    brettfish said:
    July 7, 2015 at 5:36 AM

    oh wow dude, it’s like you’re on a roll. If this stuff is biographical at the moment then it is uber heartsore but either way it is some incredible wording.

      Original-Dante responded:
      July 7, 2015 at 6:44 AM

      Thank you my friend! there’s always a little of me in these poems, haha who knows, maybe the “He” i’m referring to in this one is me lol the plot thickens …

    myowncastleeeee said:
    July 7, 2015 at 5:54 AM

    Reblogged this on myowncastleeeee.

      Original-Dante responded:
      July 7, 2015 at 6:31 AM

      Thank you so much for the reblog! ๐Ÿ™‚

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