What I Saw/What She Saw.

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Forgive her,

For realizing only too late

That when you wrote her something

You didn’t see lines

Stanzas and the occasional rhymes;

Rather, you only saw yourself

Giving her a piece,

Of your soul.

– Original-Dante ©2016

Photograph by: MarcoHeisler

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19 thoughts on “What I Saw/What She Saw.

    insidioustemptation said:
    August 23, 2016 at 3:20 PM

    ahhhhhh. Beautiful original-dante.

    prachigoyal said:
    August 23, 2016 at 3:27 PM

    It’s beautiful how you can express so much with words so less. I love this piece💟

      Original-Dante responded:
      August 23, 2016 at 3:29 PM

      Thank you, I am happy to hear that 🙂

    eddaz said:
    August 23, 2016 at 3:32 PM

    Beautiful words Dante😊

      Original-Dante responded:
      August 24, 2016 at 11:27 AM

      Thank you Eddaz 🙂 🙂 🙂

        eddaz said:
        August 24, 2016 at 12:46 PM

        You are welcome😊

    The Poetry Channel said:
    August 23, 2016 at 4:03 PM

    Sublime

    Jared Hines said:
    August 23, 2016 at 4:39 PM

    Wow! So sad, good, romantic. What poetry is.

    Pakhi said:
    August 23, 2016 at 4:40 PM

    Ah..Simply splendid!

    Mike Evans said:
    August 23, 2016 at 8:58 PM

    I love this!

    nosyjosie said:
    August 24, 2016 at 12:22 AM

    why is it always too late 😦 such a good piece though!

      Original-Dante responded:
      August 24, 2016 at 11:05 AM

      Thank you Jo…lol maybe next time it’ll be a bit early 😀

    thetraveller said:
    August 24, 2016 at 8:40 AM

    Lovely!

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