Untold Chronicles (Part 11)

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Part 1-10 can be found here

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Her existence permeated past her vessel

Etching the thought with that persistent scent

Reminiscent of red roses, left lingering

Long after her departure, fitting,

Direct correlation with that boundless

Sense of desire, love, passion

She carried, evoked, by just being,

… Not forgetting those thorns,

Indeed

Mesmerized you could be

But clinging to her with a firm grip?

Was an open invitation

To bleed.

– Original-Dante ©2017

Photograph by: shutter-bug664

Daily Prompt: Scent

 

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5 thoughts on “Untold Chronicles (Part 11)

    Ongoing/Finished Stories Update. « Original-Dante said:
    January 31, 2017 at 6:50 PM

    […] Untold Chronicles (Part 11) […]

    Ananya Sharma. said:
    February 1, 2017 at 3:31 PM

    The last three lines -Wow.
    Beautifully disturbing. Yes, ‘beautifully’.
    🙂

      Original-Dante responded:
      February 1, 2017 at 6:36 PM

      Thank you Ananya, very sweet of you to say 🙂

    nosyjosie said:
    February 4, 2017 at 3:06 PM

    “Clinging to her was an open invitation to bleed.” – love your word choice here. Beautiful piece

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